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Viking Reimu Meter
Audio reference: C:/Users/daixiawu/Downloads/维京灵梦词格.mp3
Scope
- This document stores the latest manually-audited meter.
- Numbers represent target English syllable counts.
- Chinese text is only for meaning checks and does not need to match the meter.
- English lyrics should favor hard consonants, clear stress, chantable phrasing, and repeated sea-shanty hooks.
Latest Meter
5 5 5 5 5 6 8
5 5 5 5 5 6 8
6 9 6 5 6 9 6 6
6 9 6 5 6 9 6 6
5 8 3 6
3 8 3 6 6
8 8 9 4
8 8 9 3
5 8 3 6
3 8 3 6 6
Sections
A Verse
5 5 5 5 5 6 8
5 5 5 5 5 6 8
Use for the opening narrative: North Sea fog, longship departure, Reimu boarding the prow, the donation box appearing, and Danegeld entering the premise.
B Chorus
6 9 6 5 6 9 6 6
6 9 6 5 6 9 6 6
Use as the main hook. Repeat core ideas such as Danegeld, shrine box, Hakurei, Canute, tide, and pay up.
The 9-syllable lines are dense; keep them easy to pronounce and avoid too many weak filler words.
C Bridge
5 8 3 6
3 8 3 6 6
Use for history and rulership: oath-taking, silver tribute, sea law, London's extra payment, and dead ships guarding the mist wall.
The 3-syllable lines should work as short commands or calls.
D Strong Section
8 8 9 4
8 8 9 3
Use for action: paper seals, gohei, shield walls, sea ghosts, extermination, Canute's ghost, and the tide legend.
The 4- and 3-syllable lines should land like hard closers.
C' Final Return
5 8 3 6
3 8 3 6 6
Use for resolution: homeward oars, North Sea bending to Hakurei, no crown, old debts, law, and shrine bells.
Pronunciation Notes
Danegeld= 2 syllables.Canute= 2 syllables.Reimu= 2 syllables.Hakurei= 3 syllables.- The chorus may repeat the same hook; it does not need to advance new story on every line.